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Post by catspaw65 on Aug 31, 2017 17:35:27 GMT -6
Sounds like a good start. I'm hoping the muses stick around long enough to give you more.
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Post by papaof2 on Aug 31, 2017 17:43:33 GMT -6
Good start. Lots of possibilities.
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Post by pbbrown0 on Aug 31, 2017 19:14:42 GMT -6
Wow! I feel a connection with Dave already.
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Post by 9idrr on Aug 31, 2017 21:44:59 GMT -6
Okay, ba65, we ain't lettin' you stop here. Won't accept anything less than a half-million words, and that's just for the first few chapters. I gots me this-here voodoo doll with "ba65" on the front...
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Post by gipsy on Sept 1, 2017 7:38:35 GMT -6
Moar Please
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Post by gipsy on Sept 3, 2017 10:55:15 GMT -6
Great update. Be afraid. You have awakened the MOAR monster
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Post by papaof2 on Sept 3, 2017 11:40:49 GMT -6
Seabee + cave = How big is the shelter to be and how well equipped?
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Post by pbbrown0 on Sept 3, 2017 12:35:58 GMT -6
You're on a great roll here, Bruce. Don't lose your momentum! (Keep going, Keep going, more, more, MOAR.)
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Post by brucearmstrong65 on Sept 3, 2017 12:39:39 GMT -6
Seabee + cave = How big is the shelter to be and how well equipped? Yeah, sorta telegraphed *that* one, didn't I? (Or did I?...)
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Post by papaof2 on Sept 3, 2017 12:58:27 GMT -6
Seabee + cave = How big is the shelter to be and how well equipped? Yeah, sorta telegraphed *that* one, didn't I? (Or did I?...) It ends with a question mark which could be a question or could be questioning the implication.
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Post by 9idrr on Sept 3, 2017 14:04:38 GMT -6
Ya know, you've spoiled us with your past work, so I'm gonna have to revise my estimate up to at least a million words. Oh, and it sounds as though the voodoo doll won't be needed. Folks here'll be puttin' on the pressure. Gently, of course.
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Post by kaijafon on Sept 4, 2017 7:43:04 GMT -6
I know I could handle a few dozen more dozen chapters or so Thanks for the mOAr!
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Post by boomerweps on Sept 6, 2017 9:56:59 GMT -6
Thanks a real sounding, interesting story. Please continue. I've got it in my favorites and check it everyday.
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Post by pbbrown0 on Sept 12, 2017 17:19:23 GMT -6
Thank you, Bruce. A fine chapter.
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Post by methos on Sept 12, 2017 22:32:09 GMT -6
I'm always a sucker for a good cave in a story. Keep it up. Looking good.
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Post by chillychick on Sept 12, 2017 23:19:19 GMT -6
YES!! Awesome start, please keep going!!
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Post by motherhen on Sept 13, 2017 18:06:13 GMT -6
I like this story so much, thanks!
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Post by 9idrr on Sept 13, 2017 19:13:40 GMT -6
I like this story so much, thanks! What she said!
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Post by pbbrown0 on Sept 19, 2017 21:54:47 GMT -6
In this Brown family when we have meatloaf and mashed potatoes, no one wants to leave room for desert... unless there is coffee and pecan pie. If there is pecan pie and coffee made, everyone wants to skip the meal and go straight to desert!
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Post by papaof2 on Sept 19, 2017 21:58:57 GMT -6
In this Brown family when we have meatloaf and mashed potatoes, no one wants to leave room for desert... unless there is coffee and pecan pie. If there is pecan pie and coffee made, everyone wants to skip the meal and go straight to desert! We have the same response to my wife's "from scratch" red velvet cake.
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Post by kaijafon on Sept 20, 2017 17:42:01 GMT -6
People run from my cooking! lol! thanks for the new chapter!
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Post by gipsy on Sept 21, 2017 7:20:45 GMT -6
Here I sit with a sore throat and you all are making me hungry. Shame on you.
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Post by brucearmstrong65 on Sept 21, 2017 12:48:46 GMT -6
Here I sit with a sore throat and you all are making me hungry. Shame on you. I'll try to work some nice hot Lemon Tea with honey into the next chapter.
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Post by gipsy on Sept 21, 2017 14:31:32 GMT -6
Here I sit with a sore throat and you all are making me hungry. Shame on you. I'll try to work some nice hot Lemon Tea with honey into the next chapter. Will that cure the bronchitis that caused the sore throat
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Post by brucearmstrong65 on Sept 21, 2017 15:03:08 GMT -6
I'll try to work some nice hot Lemon Tea with honey into the next chapter. Will that cure the bronchitis that caused the sore throat Dammit Jim, I'm a PAW fiction writer, not a doctor! (Or something like that...)
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