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Post by cthorner on Apr 28, 2014 13:18:19 GMT -6
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Post by crf78112 on Apr 28, 2014 17:17:27 GMT -6
Reads well and good premise, please continue.
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Post by cthorner on Apr 28, 2014 19:08:02 GMT -6
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Post by rvm45 on Apr 28, 2014 21:50:22 GMT -6
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Post by cthorner on Apr 28, 2014 22:43:17 GMT -6
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Post by mnn2300 on Apr 29, 2014 9:17:44 GMT -6
I like the story so far and am looking forward to more.
A bit of constructive criticism: I would have liked a bit more buildup to the economic crises to build the story a bit.
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Post by cthorner on Apr 29, 2014 11:02:17 GMT -6
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Post by cthorner on Apr 29, 2014 14:47:04 GMT -6
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Post by cthorner on Apr 29, 2014 18:15:01 GMT -6
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Post by kaijafon on Apr 30, 2014 14:06:32 GMT -6
wow! Thanks! Feel free to post all kinds of chapters of this story  |
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Post by cthorner on Apr 30, 2014 16:25:33 GMT -6
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Post by kaijafon on May 1, 2014 19:07:07 GMT -6
Thank you! very good short story!  |
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Post by nancy1340 on May 7, 2014 15:39:07 GMT -6
A very good story. Thank you.
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Post by hamrad on May 24, 2014 4:46:00 GMT -6
good story CT. Up to your usual high standards.
regards
Kev
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