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Post by iamnobody on Jan 1, 2023 20:45:10 GMT -6
I like it
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Post by feralferret on Jan 1, 2023 21:42:25 GMT -6
I would have never guessed that it was your first attempt at writing. It is a nice story. It is fine as a stand alone short story and is a solid base if you wish to expand on it with more chapters.
Thanks.
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Post by r80rt on Jan 2, 2023 8:39:30 GMT -6
Thank you both.
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Post by biggkidd on Jan 2, 2023 10:49:45 GMT -6
Nice job! I too am curious is that the end?
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Post by r80rt on Jan 2, 2023 11:38:21 GMT -6
Thank you. I intended for it to be a short story, but I think there is another chapter floating around in the back of my head.
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Post by iamnobody on Jan 3, 2023 9:16:36 GMT -6
Thank you. I intended for it to be a short story, but I think there is another chapter floating around in the back of my head.  |
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Post by echo6 on Jan 4, 2023 1:01:03 GMT -6
Great Story. Me Likkeee.
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Post by ydderf2 on Jan 4, 2023 18:11:12 GMT -6
There is definitely room for a few more chapters
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Post by CountryGuy on Jan 4, 2023 22:32:22 GMT -6
I like. Hope you keep it rolling. You should move it over the active written stories if so.
My first deer rifle Dad got me is a Rossi .357 Mag. Mine is just the black "blued" carbine variety with a saddle ring. My cousin, a few years later, got the SS version in .44 Mag from his Dad for his first deer rifle. When we see each other every few years, we each try to convince the other to sell his rifle to us. Great little rifle. I've thought about getting my boys the version that Henry now makes.
From that little carbine a love of pistol caliber carbines was launched.
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Post by r80rt on Jan 5, 2023 7:08:40 GMT -6
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I love the little Rossi .357's too. How can I get it moved to the proper area, I think I can add a little more but I still have no idea where it's going. |
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Post by iamnobody on Jan 5, 2023 8:32:27 GMT -6
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I love the little Rossi .357's too. How can I get it moved to the proper area, I think I can add a little more but I still have no idea where it's going. Just send a message to kaijafon and ask her to move it to the "ongoing stories" section
Then when stories are complete, ask her to move it to the completed stories.
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Post by r80rt on Jan 5, 2023 8:34:55 GMT -6
Thank you, will do.
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Post by 223shootersc on Jan 5, 2023 13:44:52 GMT -6
The MOAR Hounds are waking!
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Post by 223shootersc on Jan 5, 2023 15:09:32 GMT -6
Thanks for the new chapters!
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Post by CountryGuy on Jan 5, 2023 16:40:26 GMT -6
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Post by r80rt on Jan 5, 2023 16:45:54 GMT -6
How true that is! I hope it lived up the the high standards here.
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Post by biggkidd on Jan 5, 2023 17:00:55 GMT -6
Other than being far to short it was a great little story! GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by hunter77 on Jan 5, 2023 17:02:03 GMT -6
Very well done. Now get work on the next one. No time to wast. The moar hounds will be howling soon! Ha Ha
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Post by bluefox2 on Jan 5, 2023 17:03:41 GMT -6
Ya done good for a first timer. Hope we see more from you
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Post by feralferret on Jan 6, 2023 2:09:00 GMT -6
Thank you for a wonderful little story.
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Post by CountryGuy on Jan 7, 2023 19:40:46 GMT -6
Thank you all, you've made me feel pretty good. I'll put my thinking cap on.  |
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Post by teedee on Jan 8, 2023 14:42:54 GMT -6
Great story. You have a real talent, Thanks.
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Post by imahic on Jan 11, 2023 20:59:12 GMT -6
Thanks for the story. I thought it was pretty good for your first attempt. I hope you will write some more and look forward to reading them.
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Post by larryminn on Jan 17, 2023 1:09:25 GMT -6
Nice little story. Thank you for extending it. When does book 2 come out?
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Post by larryminn on Jan 17, 2023 2:16:42 GMT -6
I do question opening gates. If cattle, horses are in distress…. But most pasture they are fine for weeks, months. If they get hungry they pressure fences. They find their own way out once power for fencer fails. What if that herd is still owned? Cattle rustlers likely will get shot.
You open a gate, you close it.
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