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Post by fightheat on Sept 29, 2014 21:11:58 GMT -6
Thank You for all the effort you put into this fantastic story!!
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Post by mourningamerica on Oct 5, 2014 19:56:01 GMT -6
I really enjoyed this story. I hope it finds a wider audience. I also hope you write more. The characters were believable; the plot moved along swiftly; the tension was great; the description was commendable; the themes were fitting--it was a fine piece of writing.
Your treatment of that perennially thorny issue about "enhanced interrogation methods" placed the issue squarely before the reader. Likewise, the concept of telling a murderer, "You're going to die...the only question is 'quickly' or 'in great and lengthy pain'."
I'm not sure how I would act in those circumstances--but you've given me a lot to think about; which I hope to never need!
I also applaud how "Bob" quickly learns caution, as well as a willingness to retreat when its prudent. This is unusual in PAW fiction. I am accustomed to heroes never backing down. I'll be reading this again in a month or two. Best wishes.
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Post by ydderf on Oct 7, 2014 9:01:26 GMT -6
Well written with strong believable characters. As in so many cases I'm sad to see the end,perhaps the characters can be kept alive in a sequel or two.
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Post by RVN11B40 on Nov 17, 2014 19:20:04 GMT -6
Bravo! Great read!
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Post by derrick on Jan 16, 2015 3:23:51 GMT -6
Great, believable story! Thank you.
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