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Post by freebirde on Feb 3, 2014 18:51:33 GMT -6
Kaijafon, do you think I got in touch with my feminine side enough to tell the story from the female point of view? This is probably be my only female POV story, it was easier to write from a cat's POV in my story "A Cat and His Dragon".
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Post by kaijafon on Feb 3, 2014 20:07:54 GMT -6
oh why do ya have to ask ME??? lol! well being a woman, I would have dragged out the story a LOT more cause us women are really into details.... but I've never been in the service so women who have may have had that "beat" out of them.... but I could be just saying that so you would rewrite it and make longer... lol! Seriously, as a woman, I probably would NOT have put on a bikini to shoot the bad guys but I can understand how a man would think a woman would. Because a man would want to see that...and it probably would distract him. So for a guy, you did alright
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Post by freebirde on Feb 4, 2014 15:32:23 GMT -6
'Manta was not in the service, but as a diver, she couldn't talk a lot on the job. Also as a diver, bathing suits are work clothes, usually under a wet suit. She might even consider a bikini "business casual".
P.S. If you want it longer You can rewrite it. I'm done enought female POV, I got to go and do something masculin, like hunt jaguar with a blow gun.
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Post by gipsy on Jun 13, 2017 9:04:52 GMT -6
nicely done. Thanks
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Post by kaijafon on Jul 10, 2017 17:57:12 GMT -6
'Manta was not in the service, but as a diver, she couldn't talk a lot on the job. Also as a diver, bathing suits are work clothes, usually under a wet suit. She might even consider a bikini "business casual".
P.S. If you want it longer You can rewrite it. I'm done enought female POV, I got to go and do something masculin, like hunt jaguar with a blow gun. Can't believe I just found this! hahaha! I get it! hahahaha! seriously I do....hahaha! btw, women can hunt jaguar with a blowgun too! just sayin' (your post reminds of that commercial where the guy thinks his wife's "wash" is just soap and then goes out and does all those "man things" to counteract the effects of the "wash". At the end of the commercial she says "that was close" and he agrees. hilarious!!!
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Post by eyeseetwo on Nov 14, 2020 19:45:57 GMT -6
Nice.
Thank you!
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