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Post by arkansascob on Feb 4, 2021 8:35:59 GMT -6
After all the abuse she suffered you would think she would see that what John was offering wasnt anywhere near as bad. Sure hope she dont rat him out in exchange for what she may think is an easier life.
Yep John needs to run far and fast and dont look back.
COB
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Post by iamnobody on Feb 4, 2021 10:35:42 GMT -6
John looked at the dog who was sitting nearby watching him and told the dog “I'm a schmuck again” Time for him and the dog to get moving. John continued his daily life of moving around and getting supplies. He visited his guerrilla gardens for some produce and trapped some small game for meat. By the 4th day he had to be very careful, there were a large number of patrols in the area. Before he would see maybe 1 patrol every 2 weeks, whereas today he had already seen and avoided 5 patrols. He was wondering what was going on.
By day 10 after Jill left, he had a different problem. He woke up in the morning and had a nature call. As he was urinating, it was very painful, almost to the point where he was ready to scream. He looked down and saw some open sores on his private parts. What? How? Then he remembered the night before Jill left. He had got a STD from sex with her.
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Post by NCWEBNUT on Feb 4, 2021 11:43:03 GMT -6
I was once told by an old feller, don't ever stick your **** in crazy, I'm guessing John never learned that lesson, bet he does now
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Post by baldengr230 on Feb 4, 2021 13:11:46 GMT -6
What a nice Gift after saving her life!
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Post by papaof2 on Feb 4, 2021 14:00:01 GMT -6
Never put a finger - or any other appendage - in a place you haven't checked visually, whether human or machine...
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Post by kaijafon on Feb 4, 2021 15:41:27 GMT -6
now let's be fair; she had been repeated abused in the camp and it was not consensual
So do not be hard on her!
She may have not known. Many times it can be passed from someone without symptoms.
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Post by texican on Feb 4, 2021 16:10:54 GMT -6
now let's be fair; she had been repeated abused in the camp and it was not consensual So do not be hard on her! She may have not known. Many times it can be passed from someone without symptoms. She did go thru hell and repeated rapes at the camp which should have rung John's bell about leaving her alone, but a guy being a guy sex wins. Texican....
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Post by papaof2 on Feb 4, 2021 17:12:25 GMT -6
You know there can be problems when the little head gets more of the body's blood supply than the big head...
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Post by kaijafon on Feb 4, 2021 18:17:43 GMT -6
hmmm...
there are times I've see BOTH male and females "hit" just about anything that moves
In today's world; it's down right disgusting
Glad I have just my hubby and only has me.
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Post by texican on Feb 4, 2021 20:55:12 GMT -6
A good woman does help to keep a guy on the straight and narrow.
Texican....
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Post by iamnobody on Feb 5, 2021 9:45:52 GMT -6
John headed for his own cabin area where he had hid his books, some of which were medical texts and herbal books. He remembered they covered STD but he hadn't paid much attention to the details as he never expected to need such info. He opened the cache and retrieved the books. Studying the info, he identified by symptoms what he had. The cure would be from a doctor but that medicine would be out of the question nowadays with current events. He looked the STD up in the herbal books, finding the one he had, it showed what they used before modern medicine. The needed herbs grew locally and he knew the area they where.
Around noon that day as he was gathering the herbs, he heard screaming. He slowly headed that way being very cautious as the screams continued. From a ridge top he could see a small clearing in the woods with 3 men and a woman in it. A naked woman was tied by her hands to a length of rope to a stake in the ground while 3 men were taking turns at raping her. There was a small fire burning nearby with a piece of metal sticking out of it. John saw one of the men cut the woman and then another one using a pair of gloves took the hot metal from the fire and applied it to the cut. Both the cut and the hot metal were causing the woman to scream. John covered the end of his rifle scope with a sun shade so it would not give him away with a glint of light from the scope lens. He used the scope to observe the clearing. He could see the 3 men's clothing piled nearby with rifles on top. The woman was Jill..
John's thinking that Jill didn't make it far when she left him. Due to the increased patrols soon after her disappearance, he assumed she had told them about him. The clearing was surrounded by some areas of thick brush. He looked at the dog and said it looked like a trap for some schmuck to come rescue the damsel in distress. The dog seemed to agree.
John silently scouted around the clearing 2x and could only find 3 more men hiding in the brush. He had no great desire to rush in to save Jill at the risk of him being killed. He was hid near the edge of the clearing at dusk. Dusk must have been the agreed upon time to end the trap because the other 3 men came into the clearing. John could hear them say that no one was coming and it was their turn with the woman. They laid down their rifles while starting to take their clothes off .
Realizing that he would have no better time since all the guns were laid down and all the men were naked, John raised his rifle and started with the man on the left It was like the target drills he had done back at the cabin. He rode the slight recoil of the 30-30, letting the shot mostly put him onto the next target. Change magazines at the 5th shot and dropping the last man.
He waited a few minutes to see if anyone else came running to the shots. Meanwhile Jill is screaming the whole time. John tells her to be quiet. She does but is warily eyeing him. He tells her not to worry, he's not going to rape her, that she has already given him a STD and he has no desire to get anymore. Plus she had told them about him. Jill blanched and fear showed in her eyes.
John dragged the 6 bodies into the brush, kept the little bit of food he found and cached the rifles and clothing. When done, he pulled his knife and moved towards Jill. She shrank in fear. He sliced the rope binding her wrists and moved back. She got shakily to her feet and asked now what. He said she would go her way while he went his way. She told him she would die on her own. John told her she was an adult and was responsible for herself. That she had made her choice when she gave him an STD, left him and then told them about him. She was not his responsibility.
She asked which way he was going and he told her towards the north, picked up his pack and headed out of the clearing, northward into the woods. Once out of her sight, he circled around in a wide loop and went south at a fast pace. By daybreak he was 15 miles south of where he left her while she was limping along towards the north.
Here is where I am stopping John's story.
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Post by iamnobody on Feb 5, 2021 9:48:18 GMT -6
I'm hoping this story has given people “food for thought” Showing that big, flashy, expensive preps aren't needed, that a person can make do with “common” things. I wanted to show that people close to you will be your enemies. The bible says “And a man's foes shall be they of his own household” John's Story is loosely based on my life experiences.
My late wife and I were both from different Independent Fundamental Baptist churches, conservative. She actually did drive for 1½ hours one way to attend church every time the doors were open. 2 preachers vouched for her. We were married for 13 years and she appeared to be a Christian. She got cancer and from the time we found it to her death was 10 weeks. The evening before her death she started losing her balance so off to the hospital. That night she is “talking” with people she says is in the room. As I am making sure her blankets are covering her and giving her water, I get an earful. She starts talking with guys she only meet since we got married and she moved to my area. Over the 13 years of marriage, it turns out there was 5-6 guys that she had affairs with, some of them months long. I had no clue. The next day the doctor is ready to send us home. She is setting up in bed bossing the nurse when suddenly she dies. So I physically lost a wife that day. I emotionally lost a wife that day because of her adultery. I think I would of sooner been hit by the cast iron skillet that John was.
3 months later wife's married sister visited me, she's wearing painted on jeans and a tight blouse standing on my porch looking around and asking how much property I had. She was “weighing her options” of making a move on me or staying with her husband. NO THANKS. 3 preachers have basically told me it was my fault that my late wife committed adultery. Huh? My own preacher was one of those saying it was my fault. Later he also started saying people would have to voluntarily go into the FEMA camps to spread the gospel of Christ. He is no longer my preacher and he turned the rest of the congregation against me, just like John's did. And no, the last part about John getting a STD did NOT happen to me. I have been a celibate man for the 5 years I've been a widower.
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Post by solo on Feb 5, 2021 14:22:48 GMT -6
Wow, thank you sharing that with us. It is incredibly raw and you incorporated it into a good yarn.
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Post by NCWEBNUT on Feb 5, 2021 15:13:34 GMT -6
Thank you iamnobody for the interesting story God will be the final judge of our actions during life, Not so called Christians, those same so called Christians will face the same judgement. I place my Faith in what the Bible states as fact, not what some Preacher thinks they know.
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Post by jwh123 on Feb 5, 2021 15:57:26 GMT -6
Sorry to hear this story is based around your truth, and sorry for your losses. Thank you for writing!
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Post by solo on Feb 5, 2021 17:17:29 GMT -6
I meant to add.... This story has strong potential for quite a few more chapters... Just saying.
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Post by bretf on Feb 5, 2021 18:16:55 GMT -6
Thank you iamnobody for the interesting story God will be the final judge of our actions during life, Not so called Christians, those same so called Christians will face the same judgement. I place my Faith in what the Bible states as fact, not what some Preacher thinks they know. IAN, NCWEBNUT pretty much summed it up. I can't add anything to his comments, but to echo them.
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Post by texican on Feb 5, 2021 18:57:01 GMT -6
ian,
We are not responsible for others actions unless it is young children that need to be corrected.
Sorry about what happened in your life. You are alive and living the life that you should.
As solo stated, this story has multiple chapters to find out how John does.
Thanks for the story.
Texican....
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Post by bluefox2 on Feb 5, 2021 20:59:37 GMT -6
I'm hoping this story has given people “food for thought” Showing that big, flashy, expensive preps aren't needed, that a person can make do with “common” things. I wanted to show that people close to you will be your enemies. The bible says “And a man's foes shall be they of his own household” John's Story is loosely based on my life experiences.
My late wife and I were both from different Independent Fundamental Baptist churches, conservative. She actually did drive for 1½ hours one way to attend church every time the doors were open. 2 preachers vouched for her. We were married for 13 years and she appeared to be a Christian. She got cancer and from the time we found it to her death was 10 weeks. The evening before her death she started losing her balance so off to the hospital. That night she is “talking” with people she says is in the room. As I am making sure her blankets are covering her and giving her water, I get an earful. She starts talking with guys she only meet since we got married and she moved to my area. Over the 13 years of marriage, it turns out there was 5-6 guys that she had affairs with, some of them months long. I had no clue. The next day the doctor is ready to send us home. She is setting up in bed bossing the nurse when suddenly she dies. So I physically lost a wife that day. I emotionally lost a wife that day because of her adultery. I think I would of sooner been hit by the cast iron skillet that John was.
3 months later wife's married sister visited me, she's wearing painted on jeans and a tight blouse standing on my porch looking around and asking how much property I had. She was “weighing her options” of making a move on me or staying with her husband. NO THANKS. 3 preachers have basically told me it was my fault that my late wife committed adultery. Huh? My own preacher was one of those saying it was my fault. Later he also started saying people would have to voluntarily go into the FEMA camps to spread the gospel of Christ. He is no longer my preacher and he turned the rest of the congregation against me, just like John's did. And no, the last part about John getting a STD did NOT happen to me. I have been a celibate man for the 5 years I've been a widower. sometimes, as hard as life can be it provides us and others a story to learn from. You, Sir, wrote a good one.
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Post by iamnobody on Feb 6, 2021 10:29:18 GMT -6
Thank you all for your kind comments. I never thought my rambling thoughts would generate such an interest. The happenings in the story are kind of “raw” but realistic in what does happen when the very thin layer of civilization falls away. Look at history that has not been rewritten or sugar coated. Even in this great civilized country of the USA, evil has happened, is happening and will happen. Mankind is sinful.
The events in my life have drawn me closer to my Lord Jesus Christ. He is removing the dross in me. I am a Christian and I do not know how I would of handled things without having Jesus. I am that broken pottery, what God rebuilds from me, I wait to see.
The story stops here, for now. But I do have some thoughts for another short story..........
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Post by texican on Feb 6, 2021 11:29:06 GMT -6
The story stops here, for now. But I do have some thoughts for another short story..........
ian,
Oooohhhhhh, a new story promise. The moar hounds will be howling shortly.
Be prepared and ready with lots of chapters.
Texican....
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Post by iamnobody on Mar 3, 2021 15:56:02 GMT -6
John has been wandering around, continuing to look for food and supplies. He has widened his area of travel and trying to avoid any people. The FEMA 3 man patrols are still out in places, mostly around towns. They seem to be a lazy bunch, their camps are messy after they leave and they are very noisy. He saw 1 woman in his travels but gave her an extremely wide berth after his ordeal with Jill. He was reminded of Jill every time he urinated and had the pain of the STD she had given him. He had found some herbs which lessened the pain but unless he found a doctor and medicine, he knew he would have it til he died.
After a few months of travel, John had come across sign of a FEMA patrol where the men seemed to be more cautious and more professional, that could be trouble for John. He was taking extra caution in leaving no trail for them to find. He would even make a dummy bed site and then sleep in an overlook position to watch for them.
That precaution paid off for him one morning at daybreak when the dog's low growl awoke him. From his position he watched as the FEMA patrol was creeping up on his dummy sleeping site. Through the scope on his 30-30 rifle he sighted in on the back of the soldiers head and squeezed the trigger. He saw the head explode as he moved on to another target. The 2nd soldier had moved behind a log and was peeking his way with just the top of his head visible. John neatly removed the top of his head and the spray of brain matter landing on the 3rd soldier gave his position away. He was wiping the brains off his face as John put a 30-30 round into the man's chest. He changed the magazine for a full one and started towards the dead men. John's foot tangled in a vine which made him stumble, just in time for a rifle bullet to whiz by his head instead of into his chest.
John had gotten sloppy and assumed it was the standard 3 man patrol. Untangling his foot, he got behind cover and was looking for the man. Dog was watching in a direction straight ahead so that is where he concentrated at. Another bullet thunked into the tree he was behind but he did catch a glimpse of muzzle flash. Another bullet whizzed by his head and John was getting ticked off. When the next bullet came, he was ready. He screamed and hit a big branch against the ground like he had fallen. A head popped up and John put a bullet through it.
Everything was now quiet but he waited 30 minutes before making a cautious patrol of the area. No more people. He slowly approached the last man he had shot. Dead, but on closer look it was a short woman in uniform. The other 3 were men and all dead. All the other FEMA patrols had been 3 men and always looked like they were inner city thugs. What had John's attention was the fact that all 4 of these were Chinese, had US government radios and US government food rations on them. What was going on....
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Post by kaijafon on Mar 3, 2021 17:38:24 GMT -6
I'd be keeping a radio or two to listen to thanks
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Post by texican on Mar 3, 2021 19:51:27 GMT -6
I'd be keeping a radio or two to listen to thanks And ammo, firearms, food, knives and other items of use. Texican....
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Post by freebirde on Mar 3, 2021 20:48:55 GMT -6
Careful of anything being lojacked.
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